Hey. I commented on your water cycle flash! I just wanted to say that I wasn't trying to criticise your work!
I think it is a really good idea, and that more informational type flashes are needed on NG.
What you've done is good for 9-11 year old group. But I just think that you could make some improvements to this! And then you'd have a great informational flash! But what you have is still good and you should keep doing this sort of stuff!
In my opinion it is easier to learn when there is a story form (like you used), if you know what i mean?? Nice one though! I'm surprised to see that you are only 13 and doing this! Cool :D
Trollfriend
Hey. I commented on your water cycle flash! I just wanted to say that I wasn't trying to criticise your work!
I think it is a really good idea, and that more informational type flashes are needed on NG.
What you've done is good for 9-11 year old group. But I just think that you could make some improvements to this! And then you'd have a great informational flash! But what you have is still good and you should keep doing this sort of stuff!
In my opinion it is easier to learn when there is a story form (like you used), if you know what i mean?? Nice one though! I'm surprised to see that you are only 13 and doing this! Cool :D
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